Guided Practice: Rewrite a Workplace Message

Guided practice. You're given a real workplace message written poorly — unclear ask, wrong tone, buried request. Your task is to rewrite it applying what you learned in the Concept lesson.

1. Read the original message and identify what's wrong with it
2. Rewrite it with a clear subject, a specific ask, and an appropriate tone
3. Submit both versions side by side so your mentor can see the improvement

This is mentor-reviewed: expect feedback before it's marked complete.